# I have several significant issues with this piece that kill it somewhat in my mind - the biggest of which is the switch halfway from encyclopaedic style to a first person narrative. It's reads like an incomplete work - my thought is the author is afraid to finish it as they'd be then signing their own death warrant. PuppyOnTheRadio/sigsmall (21:42, 7/03/2010) Withdrawn PuppyOnTheRadio/sigsmall (00:29, 9/03/2010)