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| - UGH this is such a fail DX Took all colors from his Warrior image, and highlights are coming from the back. *hangs head in shame* Fail fail fail fail fail! I tried to smudge...and got a major fail....Dont look at my shame DX! Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Blur the black into the white a lot and add shading, because I can't see any. 16:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC) 'Kay. *bags head* I hate this image DX Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:35, December 20, 2011 (UTC) The black on his head needs to be touching the corner of his eyes like on his leader image. And lengthen the tail. 18:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC) One thing, I can't make his tail longer, for stuff like that, I use Pixirl, and his tail touches the end of the box. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC) I can do it for you if you email me the file with layers. Neneshell@gmail.com. 18:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC) I didn't use files on this one, for fear i'd lose them like i did with Rubblepaw....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC) So how are you editing it? If you don't have the file, how can you make changes, besides redoing it each time you exit? 19:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Well, like no, i have the one file that's his image, but i didn't do layers like a layer for his color and earpink and shaidng and stuff, and just did that on the one thing. Like I opened up the blank, and took the black, drew on his patches, filled in the patches, and then darkened the white a bit, added shading and highlights, the blurred everything, and added his eyes color. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 20:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC) And i did this one on Pixirl....not Gimp, 'cause Gimp is being spazzy for me atm. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 20:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC) You have to save the image as an .xcf, I believe - if it's the same on Pixlr - for the layers to save. Doing everything on one layer is not a good idea. For example, what if someone asked you to lighten the patch, which I was going to? You can't just use the dodge tool, or it'd lighten the lineart as well. I can't tell you how to make your chararts, but I can advise you to use layers. 22:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Also, no matter what the tail does need to be lengthened to match his leader blank. 23:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Darken/add shading. I really can not see it. a cat♥named Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC) Withdrawing...for reasons....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 04:00, December 21, 2011 (UTC) I'll take over, if thats okay. 06:03, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011 Go ahead, DJ. Maple: next time you withdraw an image, remember to change the title. 10:01 Wed Dec 21 I did, I put 'withdrawn.' I'm sure i did....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:28, December 21, 2011 (UTC) She did, DJ changed it I'm assuming. DJ, don't change the heading; only leads should do that. 21:23, December 21, 2011 (UTC) Okay. 03:17, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011 Lighten up the black a bit. Firestar!Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all! 03:20, December 22, 2011 (UTC) Blur the earpink. -- 04:06, December 22, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I redid the whole image, and fixed all of the above. 23:18, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011 Also fail on the tail stretch. 23:23, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011 There's waste around the charart. 00:24, December 23, 2011 (UTC) Extend the image border up so his tail isn't cut off. 03:36, December 23, 2011 (UTC) Sorry, but how do I do that? I'm kind of new around GIMP... I tried rotating the image but the lineart just got blurred. 23:20, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011 Go to 'Image' then to 'Canvas Size' at the top, then make it taller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:27, December 24, 2011 (UTC) I did that, the canvas went bigger, but the border stayed where it was. I could just make the tail tip rounder so it looks like it's not cut off from the border. 00:46, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011 Would you like help? If you have an .xcf file then send me that in an email, otherwise I'll just work off the .png to help you out :3 02:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC) Oh yeah, I forgot to mention. After you change the canvas size, you have to go to 'Layer' then hit 'Layer to Image Size' or something along those lines. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 11:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC) I tried that too Pale, but unfortunatly, it didn't work. :( Ivy, if you want to fix it, you can. I suggest you work off the png image, since the Gimp one (xcf) is really odd and doesn't look like the image I have here. I also made the tail tip rounder a bit, so Reuploaded I guess. 09:33, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011 Actually, don't worry. I've got it. 09:39, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011 It looks like his tail is kinked near the middle, try to smooth it out like the regular chararts. 15:30, December 26, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I tried that "kink" to try to make it look like the normal blanks. 00:28, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011 Smooth out the tail. It's too thin in the middle and too thick at the top. 00:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the white, and make the markings match the leader image more. The white on the forehead should go up higher, the white should cover the whole haunch, there shouldn't be any white on his shoulder, only on his forearm, and the white on his chest should go up quite as high. also redden the earpink a bit and make the eyes more amber than yellow. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Also, I can help you with the lineart on the tail if you need it. It's really no that hard. Just select part of the tail, move it up higher, and add in the missing lineart in the middle of the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - :/ I don't quite like the tail. 01:52, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011 Thicken the lineart on the tail and don't make it bulbous on the top 01:58, December 29, 2011 (UTC) I could probably do it for you, if you like. I know a perfect way to do it. 02:00, December 29, 2011 (UTC) Okay Oblivion. Just do it off the png image though, since the xcf is bad. 00:02, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011 Re-uploaded. There you go :3 00:14, December 30, 2011 (UTC) Thank you Oblivion, this looks great. Comments? 00:44, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011 Define the shading and darken it, I can barely see it, and make the white on the face a bit.... cleaner. I don't know how to describe it, it just looks kinda messy right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:19, December 30, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - Yuck! 00:23, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011 Lighten the black a bit and darken the shading slightly. It's not bad! I like it :3 01:02 Sat Dec 31 Reuploaded - I don't think changes are showing. 00:18, Sun, Jan, 1, 2012 Add some more shading to the tail and darken the shading on the haunch. Clean up the white a bit more on the face, and make the face "highlight" bigger. 01:57 Wed Jan 4 Reuploaded - I don't know how good that went, but I want this approved before it gets to number 1. 04:23, Wed, Jan, 4, 2012 Blur where the white patches meet the black. 02:34, January 5, 2012 (UTC) Dull down the ear-pink a bit; it looks too bright Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 02:41, January 6, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded - ... 05:57, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012 This looks good. CBA? 04:43, January 7, 2012 (UTC) None, Approved. 04:43, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
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