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| - File:Tuna.rogue.png Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC) define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading 21:36, 9/07/2017 Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC) Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading Reups Tuna is tasty --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC) Define the earpink^
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| - File:Tuna.rogue.png Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC) define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading 21:36, 9/07/2017 Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC) Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading Define the shading a bit on the front leg furthest from us, and the light on the front leg closest to us. 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC) think you can make the shading by the hind leg curve a bit? it looks add cutting right across the thigh. 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC) Reups Tuna is tasty --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC) Try and curve the haunch shading more - still looks the same in cutting across the haunch. I also think that the light needs to be defined on the the < side of the cat, and definitely expanded on the face. Define the ear pink. Good job. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾#cat lady 22:24, September 10, 2017 (UTC) Define the light on all legs/paws, and on the tail could you expand the shading on the back and flank? 12:11 Mon Sep 11 Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, September 11, 2017 (UTC) He needs to be a tabby (unless my cite is wrong, then ignore this) I have the ebook version of Tigerheart's Shadow, so I can't check. But if somebody who does have the solid version can verify it, I'll add it. I'm assuming you have it, as you added the site? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:10, September 11, 2017 (UTC) I checked it. He is confirmed as a tabby. 21:27, September 11, 2017 (UTC) Reups Ahhh I lurve him with stripes --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:43, September 11, 2017 (UTC) Can you define the light on the paws again Define the shading depth on the tail and hindleg closest to us, just a tad. 20:55, September 12, 2017 (UTC) think you can connect some of the tabby stripes to each other and the legs and back and tail? they look a bit more like mottled markings to me as they are. 22:42, September 12, 2017 (UTC) Reups I changed the stripe pattern and shading, though I think now I maybe should have tried to change the previous one. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, September 13, 2017 (UTC) Maybe connect them on the back like how a ticked tabby would be. They still look like they're all over the place. Maybe add a dorsal stripe and add more stripes to the face, legs, and tail? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾#cat lady 20:16, September 13, 2017 (UTC) can you define the light on the front paws a little more, and maybe smooth the stripes a tad? 0:40 Thu Sep 14 Define the earpink^ Reups How do you facial markings? --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:32, September 17, 2017 (UTC) there's waste around the ears Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:50, September 17, 2017 (UTC) It's still there, it's like a triangular patch between the ears There's also some above the nose Define the shading on the ears^ Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 23:15, September 19, 2017 (UTC) Possibly taper the stripes, especially on the face? They look paintbrush-y, and people have been told to adjust that before. 01:16 Wed Sep 20 Still see waste around the ears. I can redline if you'd like. \Reups' The waste snuk back in there in the last reups. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:23, September 20, 2017 (UTC) could you brighten the earpink? it looks a little too grayish. 23:56 Thu Sep 21 Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:16, September 22, 2017 (UTC) I can't really see the earpink. 04:56, September 23, 2017 (UTC) Could you taper the facial stripes more, or possibly make them thinner? It looks a little too thick right now. 15:13, September 23, 2017 (UTC) Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 17:30, September 23, 2017 (UTC)
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