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| - I've listed this article for peer review because I have made several major changes to the article since it passed its GA nomination, and I would like to make sure that the article is still up to standards. Also, I would like to know if this article has any chance of making it to FA status. If so, what changes/improvements should be made before I consider an FA nomination. Thanks, Davejohnsan (talk) 18:29, 28 June 2012 (UTC) The Rambling Man (talk) 19:02, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
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| - I've listed this article for peer review because I have made several major changes to the article since it passed its GA nomination, and I would like to make sure that the article is still up to standards. Also, I would like to know if this article has any chance of making it to FA status. If so, what changes/improvements should be made before I consider an FA nomination. Thanks, Davejohnsan (talk) 18:29, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
* Three paras in the lead for an article of this brevity is too much. See WP:LEAD.
* Where do I find out it's the 273rd episode? If there were a specific field in infobox for overall episode number, I'd love to use it. However, the only way is to go to Law & Order: Special Victims Unit (season 13). Davejohnsan (talk) 19:53, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* "the aftermath of the squad room shooting." I don't understand the wikiilnk here. It's to give readers context without explicitly mentioning that it was from the twelfth season finale. Davejohnsan (talk) 19:50, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* " by 7.63 viewers and received a 2.4/6% share" not many viewers (!) and I don't understand what 2.4/6% share means. Will elaborate on this. Davejohnsan (talk) 19:53, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* Infobox - is "Medical Examiner" really capitalised like that? Yes, it's a job title and should be capitalized as a proper noun. Davejohnsan (talk) 19:50, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* You could probably get away with linking "previous season premiere". The only problem with this is that there's currently no article for that episode. Davejohnsan (talk) 19:50, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* "A hotel maid,..." don't need "A " here. Will fix. Davejohnsan (talk) 19:53, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* "his DNA matches the DNA recovered" rephrase so you don't repeat DNA so quickly. Would "his DNA matches that which was recovered" work? Davejohnsan (talk) 19:50, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* Production section, first para is two short sentences, can you merge this or expand it, it's rather odd-looking! Will do. Davejohnsan (talk) 19:53, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* "French presidential election" link the relevant article. Will do. Davejohnsan (talk) 19:53, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* "most watched" hyphenate. Will do. Davejohnsan (talk) 19:53, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* Last external link could use en-dashes rather than spaced hyphens. Will do. Davejohnsan (talk) 19:53, 5 July 2012 (UTC) The Rambling Man (talk) 19:02, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
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