I forgot about this page for a while, but now that I remembered, I might as well get it Peer Reviewed, and make it a better page. Suggestions, and constructive critisism would be great. -- 13:25, 10 August 2007 (UTC) I would only use the last two paragraphs to be honest. The rest really isnt that great and i wasnt bothered that I read it. The last two papragraphs would suffice and just write something good enmough before that- this doesnt neccesarily have to be funny, just short. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Prawncider (talk • contribs)
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| - I forgot about this page for a while, but now that I remembered, I might as well get it Peer Reviewed, and make it a better page. Suggestions, and constructive critisism would be great. -- 13:25, 10 August 2007 (UTC) I would only use the last two paragraphs to be honest. The rest really isnt that great and i wasnt bothered that I read it. The last two papragraphs would suffice and just write something good enmough before that- this doesnt neccesarily have to be funny, just short. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Prawncider (talk • contribs)
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| - I forgot about this page for a while, but now that I remembered, I might as well get it Peer Reviewed, and make it a better page. Suggestions, and constructive critisism would be great. -- 13:25, 10 August 2007 (UTC) I would only use the last two paragraphs to be honest. The rest really isnt that great and i wasnt bothered that I read it. The last two papragraphs would suffice and just write something good enmough before that- this doesnt neccesarily have to be funny, just short. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Prawncider (talk • contribs) You have made few contributions here at Uncyclopedia. You might want to have more experience before commenting-- 14:29, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
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