Please review this. 22:02, 2 February 2008 (UTC) Please? Anyone? Done. --Uncognito 16:18, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
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| - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Sir Uncyclopedia (Resubmit)
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| - Please review this. 22:02, 2 February 2008 (UTC) Please? Anyone? Done. --Uncognito 16:18, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
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Mcomment
| - Aver'd. See bottom for final comments.
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Pcomment
| - It's good but the way you write it, it doesn't seem to explain what happened. It justs gives out an event and minor details relating to the event and what happened after the event. Again, look at Simeon I for an idea on how to write the article.
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Icomment
| - It's good but why does there have to be soo many pictures of just Sir Uncyclopedia, we want to see him fighting Encyclopedia Dramatica or Wikipedia for that matter. It'll make him seem more awesome.
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Ccomment
| - You really have a great concept here, a knight working for the honorable Oscar Wilde and Sophia, but it just isn't there at the moment because we're wondering what exactly happened.
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Hcomment
| - It fell flat because it felt like I was reading any other Uncyclopedia article. Case in point, I didn't find anything that would stand out of the crowd. To get a good sense of humor to this article. Try reading Simeon I and adapting the humor from there to your article.
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Fcomment
| - I feel like there is potential in this article but it's just not being let out. But I'm certain that if you remain committed to your idea, you can create a pretty good project.
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| - Please review this. 22:02, 2 February 2008 (UTC) Please? Anyone? Done. --Uncognito 16:18, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
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