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Notes: This article has been carefully improved after acknowledging the criticisms from the first pee. A. SHePerD 12:05, 3 March 2009 (UTC)

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  • Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnBooks:Rorschach's journal (v2.0)
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  • Notes: This article has been carefully improved after acknowledging the criticisms from the first pee. A. SHePerD 12:05, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
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  • I liked this article. It's funny, but it does still need some final touch editing.
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  • --10-13
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  • The images that are there are funny enough, keep them, but change the caption on the womanizing one, as it doesn't make much sense with the journal entry. However, I would like to see 1 or 2 more. May I suggest one near the end, with Rorschach depressed or threatening to kill himself? This one isn't neccessary, but I do think that there should be at least 1 more pic.
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  • 3(xsd:double)
Ccomment
  • Easily a very good concept. A little bit simple, but that's fine. This doesn't really need changed; it's pretty much good as it is.
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  • 8(xsd:integer)
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  • 6(xsd:integer)
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  • This is pretty funny, as long as you know who Ror is. If you don't, it's confusing, but it still works because you can relate a lot of the things to a normal-ish emo. I like how you say that suicidal kids are retarded and then how he considers at the end, making him a hypocrite, and, by his terms, a retard. I also like the comments about him comparing himself to the blue man, and the repetitive emo tags. More irony as he apparently hates gays but is sort of in love with the blue guy. The one big problem I have with this is at the end. I get the reference, and in general, it would be funny, but I don't like it in this article. You could keep it, but definitely change it up a bit. The "This is Snydaaaaaa!" part isn't that funny in my opinion.
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  • 5(xsd:integer)
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  • 7(xsd:double)
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  • I wouldn't have nommed this already, it still needs a few fix-ups.
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  • Notes: This article has been carefully improved after acknowledging the criticisms from the first pee. A. SHePerD 12:05, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
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