It's a rewrite of an article that was flagged for a rewrite. Seems more coherent to me, and a bit closer to real-life numerologist whackjob theory. Concernedresident 10:44, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
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| - It's a rewrite of an article that was flagged for a rewrite. Seems more coherent to me, and a bit closer to real-life numerologist whackjob theory. Concernedresident 10:44, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
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| - I find this to be overall adequate.
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| - The style is okay, but, similar to the concept, could be more focused. It's voice seems a little neurotic. It seems kind of biased but not overly biased. Taking humanity out of this article and using a more absolute and computer-like, less qualifying, voice could add some effect to this article if the comedy was amplified and dramatized some more. Grammar could use some improvement. Subjects and verbs need to agree.
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| - The Hitler picture's pretty nice but I think a couple more pictures would aid this article. Its caption could be a little bit less intelligent so its hilarity can be maximized. Personally, I don't get its caption and don't expect to be the only one who doesn't.
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| - I think there is a good concept here, but its a little bit unfocused. There is "this/these person believe this" in some of the sections but its in an awkward space between random evidence and slightly inadequate parallelism.
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| - I think this article would be funnier if there was some more serious beliefs of numerology to contrast the creative BS that is present. Some slightly intelligent truths of numerology and more of its purposes would be great to be mocked. Maybe adding some more numerologists and claiming some celebritries are numerologiss could add to this article. I find the section "Standardisation of Numbers" to be a wee bit failure. Some obvious meanings of different/random numbers and some numerical pop culture references could help. A section on the methods of numerology could be pretty hilarious if set up right.
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| - In summation, I think the grammar could use some modest improvement, some more contrast for more laughs, and the format more organized.
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| - It's a rewrite of an article that was flagged for a rewrite. Seems more coherent to me, and a bit closer to real-life numerologist whackjob theory. Concernedresident 10:44, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
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