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| - I would like to make it known that I give my permission to anyone to make spelling and grammatical edits, and to improve in general cleanup. Darth Wylind (Talk) 18:37, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
* Isn't part of the process to learn how to write a proper narrative and fix these things up yourself, hm? –Victor Image:Redstarbird.png (talk page) 06:54, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
* I believe others have been telling you where your errors are. ;) –Victor Image:Redstarbird.png (talk page) 18:53, 1 February 2009 (UTC) Sure, I'll keep working on it. Darth Wylind (Talk) 01:09, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
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| - I would like to make it known that I give my permission to anyone to make spelling and grammatical edits, and to improve in general cleanup. Darth Wylind (Talk) 18:37, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
* Isn't part of the process to learn how to write a proper narrative and fix these things up yourself, hm? –Victor Image:Redstarbird.png (talk page) 06:54, 1 February 2009 (UTC) Yes, but an author can only spot so many of his/her own mistakes. I believe I've fixed most of them, but others must tell me what I've missed, otherwise I've already looked and didn't see it so it's going unnoticed. Darth Wylind (Talk) 16:30, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
* I believe others have been telling you where your errors are. ;) –Victor Image:Redstarbird.png (talk page) 18:53, 1 February 2009 (UTC) And I think I've fixed most of the things they've pointed out. I'm waiting for the list to be updated or streaked off so I can see what's left to be done. Darth Wylind (Talk) 19:12, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
* I still see a nice long list of things for you to fix, and many of them are not simple. You've either neglected to note that the objections have been addressed, or you still have work to do. I hope you'll understand, but I don't really want to check the story five or six times to see if you've updated everything—I much prefer to handle all the objections at once, if that makes sense. Atarumaster88 Image:Jedi Order.svg (Talk page) 20:37, 1 February 2009 (UTC) Sure, I'll keep working on it. Darth Wylind (Talk) 01:09, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
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