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| - As per FA nom page, rules rules 3, 9 (exploits on Cerea), 11, 12 and 17. Also needs more sectioning. --Eyrezer 08:51, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
* i'll get right on it. (p.s. any help would be most appreciated) AdmirableAckbar 10:16, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
* how does this look. I've sectioned it appropriately and revamped and lengthened his exploits on cerea. AdmirableAckbar 12:01, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
* That is looking a lot better. There is still some sourcing to do though. And his CCG appearance should be added to the sources. 9 is probably done but not certain on that yet. --Eyrezer 02:56, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
* There is also some info in the intro that needs to go in the main body somewhere. Perhaps put the appearance description at the top before diving into Cerea.--Eyrezer 08:28, 17
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| - As per FA nom page, rules rules 3, 9 (exploits on Cerea), 11, 12 and 17. Also needs more sectioning. --Eyrezer 08:51, 11 June 2007 (UTC)
* i'll get right on it. (p.s. any help would be most appreciated) AdmirableAckbar 10:16, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
* how does this look. I've sectioned it appropriately and revamped and lengthened his exploits on cerea. AdmirableAckbar 12:01, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
* That is looking a lot better. There is still some sourcing to do though. And his CCG appearance should be added to the sources. 9 is probably done but not certain on that yet. --Eyrezer 02:56, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
* There is also some info in the intro that needs to go in the main body somewhere. Perhaps put the appearance description at the top before diving into Cerea.--Eyrezer 08:28, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
* i moved physical appearance to the top, and added CCG to the sources. Which points need sourcing? AdmirableAckbar 16:44, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
* all info in the intro now seems to be in main body as well. AdmirableAckbar 16:48, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
* Re Sourcing: there are whole paragraphs unattributed to a source. Ie Val's offer and the Carkoon sections. --Eyrezer 07:55, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
* okay, i'll get round to it later AdmirableAckbar 12:06, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
* i put in several more references and improved the article a bit AdmirableAckbar 20:12, 19 June 2007 (UTC)
* Lacks info on his early life from GG5. --Eyrezer 04:15, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
* added AdmirableAckbar 12:03, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
* is it missing anything else? AdmirableAckbar 10:39, 21 June 2007 (UTC)
* What happened in The Employment Test? And it could do with an equipment section with some info on hs ship. See Zuckuss for an example. --Eyrezer 02:42, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
* in the employment test he tells someone about when the Gamorreans came to work for Jabba. I added it + the equipment section AdmirableAckbar 18:59, 22 June 2007 (UTC)
* The BTS note that Ephant Mon was not onboard the Khetanna needs to be sourced.
* done AdmirableAckbar 14:00, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
* The first bio paragraph and the equipment section need to be sourced correctly. Ie is the source for the ship, the cane, the skiff and the vibroblade the same?
* done AdmirableAckbar 14:00, 26 June 2007 (UTC)
* I see quite a few spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. Sentence style is occasionally awkward and shifts tense in a few places. The Galaxies image of him is kind of weird, the way he's floating in a blue nothingness; can we have a better one? Gonk (Gonk!) 21:07, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
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