binclin 08:29, 2 Yoon 2008 (UTC) Well, It was my first article and I wanted to do domething completely randumb. Thanks for your thoughts on it, I do agree it needs more spunk but im too lazy. Any tips on how to improve on this and in my future articles? 17:57, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC) You could always make them a little more coherent, and think before you write. -- 18:05, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC) I always thought it was dont think at all and just write whatever, Dont know where i got that idea from. 21:09, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC)
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| - binclin 08:29, 2 Yoon 2008 (UTC) Well, It was my first article and I wanted to do domething completely randumb. Thanks for your thoughts on it, I do agree it needs more spunk but im too lazy. Any tips on how to improve on this and in my future articles? 17:57, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC) You could always make them a little more coherent, and think before you write. -- 18:05, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC) I always thought it was dont think at all and just write whatever, Dont know where i got that idea from. 21:09, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC)
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| - Not great images tbh. There's so much oppurtunity here!
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| - Nazis.... A mehpic concept. A good title & subject matter, but would need to deliver the goods without going to ranty for it to become good.
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| - I hate to criticise, but that's what reviews are for.
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| - ...didn't deliver the goods. I'm starting to wonder if Binclin has an unhealthy obcession with Nazis, but nonetheless, take a more coherent, perhaps witty stance to improve this article.
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| - binclin 08:29, 2 Yoon 2008 (UTC) Well, It was my first article and I wanted to do domething completely randumb. Thanks for your thoughts on it, I do agree it needs more spunk but im too lazy. Any tips on how to improve on this and in my future articles? 17:57, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC) You could always make them a little more coherent, and think before you write. -- 18:05, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC) I always thought it was dont think at all and just write whatever, Dont know where i got that idea from. 21:09, 24 Yoon 2008 (UTC)
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