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| - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/John Kasich
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| - Thares (talk) 00:58, January 10, 2016 (UTC)
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| - Nice piece that covers a US Presidential candidate, it left me wanting more. There is a lot of humour to be drawn out of those paragraphs, expanding on the detail of events with a view to injecting jokes and lines. This would beef-up the article without having to add more information.
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| - Fine overall. But I am not one to comment!
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| - Only two pictures, which is fine for this size of article. The GIF is terrific!
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| - Keeping it simple, the strategy is a wry bio of a US Presidential Candidate. It needs some daft transitions and unpredictability, like the Taylor Swift line. Bring it back to earth occasionally and keep the reader off guard with a finish they won't expect.
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| - As a Brit, I do not know this character so there will be jokes I miss. There are a couple of very funny bits, I loved the Taylor Swift ticket line and the marshall arts angle was good. It is a good framework, but it is also rife for expanding the humor:
One important moment that even he called the best of his career is arranging the government shutdown of 1995. But over his two decades in the House, no one actually who this Kasich guy is. In fact, his colleagues nickname him "That Guy".
With a twist of irony:
Kasich's highest Political achievement to date was supporting the partial shutdown of the Federal Government in 1995, over spending money on education, health and the environment. With such a high-profile standing, and clear vision of a country full of uneducated, unhealthy, chemical burning squirrel killers, it was a wonder that after his two decades in the House, no one actually knew who he was. In fact, his colleagues nicknamed him "Erm... that guy... I think".
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| - Thares (talk) 00:58, January 10, 2016 (UTC)
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