My first UnTunes song. I know this isn't that good, but I'd like some feedback on it, since I'm thinking that making more UnTunes songs would be fun. 03:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
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| - My first UnTunes song. I know this isn't that good, but I'd like some feedback on it, since I'm thinking that making more UnTunes songs would be fun. 03:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
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| - Again, great idea, but the approach is too simple to sustain a two and a half minute song. You need more to poke fun of.
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| - The written part was helpful, but unless there is something interesting for the reader, the lyrics may not be necessary, unless you get that part fixed up.
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| - While images are not central to the piece, the one you provided ought to have been less "German" and more "Techno Music".
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| - I get it. Great concept. Nice Kraftwerk groove going on.
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| - I kind of "get it" early on. I just wonder if there are other things to poke fun of, or more electronic beats/instruments you can program to make it a tad less monotonous .
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| - My first UnTunes song. I know this isn't that good, but I'd like some feedback on it, since I'm thinking that making more UnTunes songs would be fun. 03:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
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