Yeah, soz, I rewrote it, please tell me whether the rewrite was good or bad. Thanks in advance, - 20:23, Sep 11, 2007 "No obvious grammatical oddjobs, but it feels... icky somehow." Icky like your MOM! Sorry, couldn't resist. Seriously, though, thanks for the review. 02:22, Sep 12, 2007
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| - Yeah, soz, I rewrote it, please tell me whether the rewrite was good or bad. Thanks in advance, - 20:23, Sep 11, 2007 "No obvious grammatical oddjobs, but it feels... icky somehow." Icky like your MOM! Sorry, couldn't resist. Seriously, though, thanks for the review. 02:22, Sep 12, 2007
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| - Extra points for rewriting an utter article.
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| - No obvious grammatical oddjobs, but it feels... icky somehow.
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| - Remember that giggle? It came from the "My other ride" picture. Perfect bumpersticker. Still room for improvement.
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| - It's been over-used. I know there's not much for a high concept that can be worked on, but perhaps a satire on the satire? Maybe the fact that all of those yo momma jokes, are, in fact, all false?
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| - It's one hell of an improvement over the previous version, which, incidentally, could be culled into Top 100 Facts About Your Mom or some such.
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| - Yeah, soz, I rewrote it, please tell me whether the rewrite was good or bad. Thanks in advance, - 20:23, Sep 11, 2007 "No obvious grammatical oddjobs, but it feels... icky somehow." Icky like your MOM! Sorry, couldn't resist. Seriously, though, thanks for the review. 02:22, Sep 12, 2007
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