OK, well, here it is, and I'm pretty pleased with what I think is close to a final draft. Is the ending good? How're the pics? If there's anything that can be done to improve the page, I'll be glad to listen and improve. 03:09, Aug 20, 2007
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| - OK, well, here it is, and I'm pretty pleased with what I think is close to a final draft. Is the ending good? How're the pics? If there's anything that can be done to improve the page, I'll be glad to listen and improve. 03:09, Aug 20, 2007
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| - Consider revising the ending of the epilogue to be more consistent with the rest of the story's tone. I feel like the whole text was very inspired, then you got lazy as you wrote the last couple of sentences.
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| - Nothing like Tom Hanks movies for inspiration, eh?
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| - Humor at its most humorously funny....at least until something more so comes along.
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| - OK, well, here it is, and I'm pretty pleased with what I think is close to a final draft. Is the ending good? How're the pics? If there's anything that can be done to improve the page, I'll be glad to listen and improve. 03:09, Aug 20, 2007
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