I'm resubmitting Female Video Gamers for Pee Review. I have added more stuff and hopefully made it funnier. It got a 36 on its last Pee Review. --333pet 02:45, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
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| - I'm resubmitting Female Video Gamers for Pee Review. I have added more stuff and hopefully made it funnier. It got a 36 on its last Pee Review. --333pet 02:45, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
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| - a long while from VFH, but keep on truckin! It rocks so far!
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| - Mediocre formatting here and there.
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| - None of those images are necessary, really, because they don't add diddly to the article!
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| - As soon as I saw the title, I thought "dammit, why didn't I think of that?"
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| - Maybe section by section? Ok!
# intro: Great introduction. You set it up all nice and understandable-like.
# Before grls: Don't go overboard. Get rid of that last parenthesis "", we get it already.
# Sightings: Interesting, and fits the concept, but again, you're explaining stuff to us that we already get. Your readers aren't morons... well, some aren't...
# Reactions: Ha! Nice.
# Interacting / A MMORPG grl / A FPS grl / A Fighting grl / A RTS grl: Again, nice. You expanded the idea into territories I hadn't thought of before. However, it seems like it's formatted wrong. Shouldn't these sections be under one header, "interacting"? It was confusing.
# Conclusion: Uuuhhh? What's with the bench? Meh, okay.
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| - I'm resubmitting Female Video Gamers for Pee Review. I have added more stuff and hopefully made it funnier. It got a 36 on its last Pee Review. --333pet 02:45, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
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