Thatcomputerperson 21:55, 15 April 2009 (UTC) Really need some help to make this something good... Thunderboi A proud maker of Everquest! 13:41, 16 April 2009 (UTC) I agree with Thatcomputerperson. Seriously need more help and try to make funnier puns/jokes.
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| - this is low on content, ugly, incomprehensible at times, and confusing. you need a major overhaul, but before that you need to work on the concept and direction.
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| - the images aren't too bad. the card one is good, but the ghost one really doesn't add much, and further confuses the reader.
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| - my preview button tells me that your score is 17.3, a dangerously low place to be. without improvement this is likely to face deletion. but you can improve it! come up with some sort of central idea: that should be your first step. once you decide to focus on the OLD MAN's crazy experiments, or the glitchesches ititit causesuses suchsuch asasas repeatingting thethet lastlast fourfour lettersters ofofof everyvery wordword, you can use that concept throughout the article to tie everything together. once you have that done, come back and get another review for some fine-tuning. take a look at HTBFANJS for some good inspiration, and feel free to come by my talk page with any question. good luck!
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| - Thatcomputerperson 21:55, 15 April 2009 (UTC) Really need some help to make this something good... Thunderboi A proud maker of Everquest! 13:41, 16 April 2009 (UTC) I agree with Thatcomputerperson. Seriously need more help and try to make funnier puns/jokes.
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