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| - File:Onion.rogue.pngSecond charart! this is like a fail though... Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! Looks good! I think you should make the silver parts darker, though. They look very pale gray- almost white. And maybe make the ear pink bigger. It's a little small. ♫ mosspool ♫22:27, August 7, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED :3 did what you saidMossy I fight to live I live to fight! Good! Sharpen the black patches. (If you use pixlr, I'm not sure if they have an option to do that but they should) ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:58, August 7, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED okey dokey x3 Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! Lighten the ear pink and lighten the shading on the paws, otherwise, very nice! SUNSPIRIT ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 06:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED done :) anything else? Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! Make the ear pink more trianglular. 19:20, August 9, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED fixed :) anything else?Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 13:56, August 10, 2010 (UTC) Hmm, I think you could afford to sharpen the patches some more. They're a little too blurred. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 20:16, August 10, 2010 (UTC) Is he supposed to be black and white? The white needs to be lightened. Darkhallows...Mew? 21:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC) Onion is silver and black, not white, so I think that the color is fine, but the ear pink needs to be more of a reddish color rather than pink. 03:36, August 11, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED i re-did the whole image because the sharpen tool hates me for some reason xD but i think it looks better now but thats for you guys to decide.Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 18:59, August 11, 2010 (UTC) I suggest making the earpink more reddish then pinkish. 20:14, August 12, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED x3 did that :) anything else?Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 22:08, August 12, 2010 (UTC) I think you should blur the transitions more. 04:20, August 13, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED fixed :) anything else? :3Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 16:48, August 13, 2010 (UTC) De-saturate the earpink. It looks too bright now. 22:03, August 13, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED done anything else? :3Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 22:10, August 13, 2010 (UTC) Make the ear pink more reddish--nightshine 00:31, August 14, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED fixed x3Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 01:16, August 14, 2010 (UTC) Good! She looks fine now :D 01:23, August 14, 2010 (UTC) Thank yew x3Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 03:56, August 14, 2010 (UTC) Darken the stomach shading and blur the gray transistion. 00:51, August 15, 2010 (UTC) RE-UPLOADED fixed anything else? :)Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 14:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC) This is beautiful. Well done for only your second. Comments before approval? -- 03:00, August 16, 2010 (UTC) Approved. 18:22, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
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