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| - Pictures and information is outdated. --Scuzzy Beta (talk) 17:31, January 31, 2014 (UTC)
* Support - It is pretty terrible, doesn't mention how Veldaban became king, and stuff. Wahisietel (Talk) File:Quest map icon.png 20:00, January 26, 2014 (UTC)
* Support - Just to add onto what Battleben and Scuzzy Beta said:
* This article has absolutely no references. This makes it very inconvenient to try to verify the information in the "History" section if I don't know where this information is coming from in the first place.
* "Transportation" section has several one sentence paragraphs. Perhaps some of these could be merged?
* "Inhabitants": This section is empty. Even though it does link to another article, it would be nice if a summary of the information there were included
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| - Pictures and information is outdated. --Scuzzy Beta (talk) 17:31, January 31, 2014 (UTC)
* Support - It is pretty terrible, doesn't mention how Veldaban became king, and stuff. Wahisietel (Talk) File:Quest map icon.png 20:00, January 26, 2014 (UTC)
* Support - Just to add onto what Battleben and Scuzzy Beta said:
* This article has absolutely no references. This makes it very inconvenient to try to verify the information in the "History" section if I don't know where this information is coming from in the first place.
* "Transportation" section has several one sentence paragraphs. Perhaps some of these could be merged?
* "Inhabitants": This section is empty. Even though it does link to another article, it would be nice if a summary of the information there were included in this article for comprehensiveness.
* Parts of the article read like an advertisement, contrary to RS:NPOV. This is an encyclopedia, not a brochure. Examples:
* "Its close proximity to an anvil makes it an excellent place to smith, rivalling areas such as Varrock and Yanille" [emphasis added]
* "Keldagrim is an excellent location to begin searching for an item" [emphasis added]
* "The upper level has several rooms where NPCS can spend the night and offers an excellent view of one of the River Kelda's main tributaries" [emphasis added] Smithing (talk | contribs) 20:45, January 26, 2014 (UTC) {{Closure|Discussion has died.}} TEMU File:Cake detail.png JIN 10:06, February 5, 2014 (UTC) Closed - Keldagrim will be delisted. --LiquidTalk 13:36, February 6, 2014 (UTC)
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