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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to try to better this article, but I have no idea where to start the clean up. Sorry if the article is bad, but I wanted to know where it can be improved. So please give a brief account on what can be done to better it. Thanks, TheOriginalSoni (talk) 17:26, 27 June 2012 (UTC) In general it's desperately in need of references. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:21, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

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  • I've listed this article for peer review because I want to try to better this article, but I have no idea where to start the clean up. Sorry if the article is bad, but I wanted to know where it can be improved. So please give a brief account on what can be done to better it. Thanks, TheOriginalSoni (talk) 17:26, 27 June 2012 (UTC) In general it's desperately in need of references. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:21, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
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  • I've listed this article for peer review because I want to try to better this article, but I have no idea where to start the clean up. Sorry if the article is bad, but I wanted to know where it can be improved. So please give a brief account on what can be done to better it. Thanks, TheOriginalSoni (talk) 17:26, 27 June 2012 (UTC) * Too many too short paras in the lead. See WP:LEAD for guidance on how may paras to expect here. * Call it "English language", not "English". * Should "S.D.B." really be "(SDB)" after the title? * "The Telegraph Education Foundation" if this is notable, why doesn't it have an article? * "Telegraph Awards Hall of Fame" ditto. * History section could use being turned into prose rather than just a list of bullet points. * "Mgr. Mathias" what is Mgr.? * Savio is a dab link. * History has no refs at all. * Full of trivia like "The first Past Pupils Day was held In October 1955."... * Don't bold the section titles. * No idea what ISC and ISCE is, nor what the "School Average" (shouldn't that be "average") is. * Again, "Extra-curricular" section is unreferenced, and needs work to prose it rather than just be a list of trivia. * Same with Facilities. In general it's desperately in need of references. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:21, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
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