I am submitting this for the second, but certainly not last, time. You just watch, one day I'll get something on VFH, HAhahahahahahah! The.original.joe.shmoe blahImage:Selfportrait.jpgMUN
* 20-hit combo
* adjective
* adverb
* ad
* aerodynamics
* age
* air conditioner
* air
* airplane
* alcohol
* alfalfa
* algorithm
* alpaca sandwich
* amplifier
* anchovies
* angel
* anger
* animal
* answer
* antibacterial
* antibody
* antidisestablishmentarianist
* anvil
* anything
* ape
* apple juice
* apple
* applesauce
* apples
* arcade
* archangel
* arc welder
* armpit hair
* arthritis
* article
* asparagus
* Aspergers
* attorney
* Audi
* autobiog
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| - I am submitting this for the second, but certainly not last, time. You just watch, one day I'll get something on VFH, HAhahahahahahah! The.original.joe.shmoe blahImage:Selfportrait.jpgMUN
* 20-hit combo
* adjective
* adverb
* ad
* aerodynamics
* age
* air conditioner
* air
* airplane
* alcohol
* alfalfa
* algorithm
* alpaca sandwich
* amplifier
* anchovies
* angel
* anger
* animal
* answer
* antibacterial
* antibody
* antidisestablishmentarianist
* anvil
* anything
* ape
* apple juice
* apple
* applesauce
* apples
* arcade
* archangel
* arc welder
* armpit hair
* arthritis
* article
* asparagus
* Aspergers
* attorney
* Audi
* autobiog
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Mcomment
| - Average of all the scores.
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Pcomment
| - Something about the prose makes it hard to understand. I think you should capitalize Whatchamacallit as a brand name rather than a regular noun.
Also, the article in general needs more formatting, such as lists, bolds, and italics, just make the article more attractive in general. The article is actually not that badly written, but the random words make it look like it's a lot less intelligent than it actually could be.
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Icomment
| - The whole point of the Whatchamacallit is that it is vague. So having a picture of the whatchamacallit ddetracts from this value. And none of them are particularly funny. So the images need more work in general, and perhaps more of them.
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Ccomment
| - It's not ready! It's way too short to be VFH, and several of the sections on the page could be expanded. It needs more work as a total, but you've got something that could be VFH in the future, if you keep working on it.
I see potential, but the lack of humor, the formatting, and certain issues keep that potential hidden.
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Hcomment
| - Okay, introduction is okay, because it's being very obscure, that got a smile out of me. But the humor kind of stops there. Use more pronouns and obscure references, and less links to Your mom and less random sentences about zombies.
You've got something going with some of the jokes that are on this page, but the delivery of the jokes needs work. Some more formatting could probably help out with this.
So, as far as humor goes, there's nothing in here that would make me wince, but nothing tha twould make me laugh, either. Be more consistent with the obscurity. References to That guy, This Guy, and Anonymous are all welcome. And nix the Zombie reference. It 's just random. Maybe something like, "Whatsisfaysse would be spinning in his grave, if it were possible for dead people to spin in graves." Less is more.
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Fcomment
| - Good Idea, but the execution needs work. It's not finished, not even. Add more content, and make the content that you have funnier, and you'll have an awesome article on your hands.
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| - I am submitting this for the second, but certainly not last, time. You just watch, one day I'll get something on VFH, HAhahahahahahah! The.original.joe.shmoe blahImage:Selfportrait.jpgMUN
* 20-hit combo
* adjective
* adverb
* ad
* aerodynamics
* age
* air conditioner
* air
* airplane
* alcohol
* alfalfa
* algorithm
* alpaca sandwich
* amplifier
* anchovies
* angel
* anger
* animal
* answer
* antibacterial
* antibody
* antidisestablishmentarianist
* anvil
* anything
* ape
* apple juice
* apple
* applesauce
* apples
* arcade
* archangel
* arc welder
* armpit hair
* arthritis
* article
* asparagus
* Aspergers
* attorney
* Audi
* autobiography
* automobile
* aviator
* ax murderer
* babboon butt
* baby
* bachelor
* balloon
* ballroom
* bamboo
* banana
* band
* bank robbery
* barn
* baseball bat
* bass guitar
* bathtub
* bat
* bazooka
* beach ball
* beagle
* beans
* bear
* belfry
* belt
* bestiality
* bevel
* bikini
* bimbo
* bingo
* bishop
* bistro
* blah
* blanket
* blasphemy
* blender
* blimp
* blow-up doll
* bluejay
* boardwalk
* boar
* boat
* bollocks
* bomb
* book
* bottle
* bowling ball
* brand
* bread knife
* brickbat
* brick wall
* bridge
* brisket
* broadsword
* broom
* buddy
* buffalo
* Buick
* bum
* bunny
* businessman
* button
* cabinet
* cable
* cadaver
* Cadillac
* cake
* cake
* calculator
* camera
* candlestick
* can opener
* cardboard box
* card game
* carriage
* cartilage
* cartoon
* cartridge
* castle
* caterer
* cat
* cauldron
* CD
* cellphone
* cellulite
* centrifuge
* cheeseburger with a large fries and a coke, plus a kids meal
* cheese
* chessboard
* cheval-de-frise
* Chevrolet
* chiffon
* chisel
* chorus
* chromosome
* Chuck Norris impersonator
* chump
* cigarette
* cinderblock
* claptrap
* classified document
* clavichord
* clavicle
* clever trick
* cliff
* clitoris
* clock
* cob
* cockgoblin
* cockroach
* cod
* codpeice
* codswallop
* comma
* communist
* computer
* conspiracy
* content
* contraband
* contradiction
* cookie cutter
* copyist
* copypasta
* corndog
* couch potato
* council of national reconstruction
* cowbell
* cow
* crab cake
* critter
* crusher
* crystal
* cubicle
* cucumber
* cuddly toy
* curry
* custard
* cutlass
* cutting board
* Daewoo
* daffodil
* daydream
* dead flounder
* death
* death plane
* deity of personal preference
* Democrat
* devaporiser
* deviant
* diamond
* dictator
* diesel engine
* diet coke
* diet mouthwash
* diet pill
* diode
* disaster
* discussion
* dishrag
* dishwasher
* DJ
* document
* dog house
* dog
* dollhouse
* dolly
* dominatrix
* domino
* dongle
* Doppelgänger
* dot
* drain cleaner
* driptray
* Dunmer
* DVD
* dyslexia
* dystopia
* earlobe
* ectoplasm
* eel
* egg
* electric toothbrush
* electrified mocha chinchilla
* electron
* elephant
* elf
* encyclopedia
* engraving
* entropy
* equestrian
* escape pod
* espresso
* etch-a-sketch
* etching
* event
* Evil Illuminati Adolf Hitler Clone Society
* evil secret Canadian mind-control device
* excrement
* exhaust pipe
* exit sign
* extension cord
* facepalm
* faceplant
* factoid
* factory
* fantasy
* fat
* fealty
* feces
* feng shui
* fiasco
* fib
* fiddle
* fire hydrant
* fistula
* flagella
* flan
* flap
* flatulence
* flightdeck
* fluorescent light
* foible
* Ford Pinto
* forest
* fork
* fountain
* freedom fighter
* fritter
* frying pan
* funeral
* Furby
* furnace
* furry
* galleon
* Game Boy
* gamelan
* garbage bin
* gasoline
* gas tank
* Gatsby
* Geiger counter
* gelato
* General Tso's kitten
* glass orb
* glucose
* glue
* glycerin
* Goblin Glider
* goose egg
* gork
* governor
* graffiti
* Green Lantern ring
* grue
* guide
* guillotine
* guitar
* gun
* guru
* gymnasium
* gyroscope
* hadron
* hailstone
* hairball
* hallway
* handstand
* harpsichord
* helm
* heretic
* hero
* hideout
* high-powered laser rifle
* hitman
* hobgoblin
* holster
* Holy Martian Empire
* home theater system
* homology
* homotopy
* Honda
* horse
* hose
* hostel
* hot dog
* hotel
* houseplant
* hovel
* hub cap
* Hyakugojyuuichi!!
* hybrid engine
* Hyundai
* ice skate
* icicle
* idiot
* igloo
* igneous protrusion
* imitation fake vomit
* impetus
* infinity
* insanity
* iPod
* jeans
* jellybean
* jelly
* Juffo-Wup
* juice
* jungle
* kakistocracy
* kamikaze
* katzenjammer
* keyboard
* killer whale
* Kirby
* kitten chow mein
* kitten
* kitten piccata
* kitten pot pie<
* knickknack
* Kodak
* Kremling
* kumquat
* l33t h4x0r
* lasagna
* lava
* lawnmower
* league
* leaking roof
* leash
* lemming
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* lens
* lentil soup
* leukemia
* library
* liger
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* limited edition, gold plated, autographed rabbi
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* linux
* lipmusic
* liquidation
* liquid goo
* lisp
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* llama
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* lobster
* lockpick
* lollipop
* loser
* love
* lowbrow
* LSD
* lubricant
* lucky bastard
* luggage
* lumber
* lunch
* mad axe-murderer
* magma
* mammary gland
* mandate
* marshmallow
* Mazda
* melanoma
* memo
* mesothelioma
* Mexican wave
* microcosm
* microscope
* microwave
* MIDI controller
* milk
* milquetoast
* minecart
* minefield
* Minolta
* Mitsubishi
* mitten
* mongoose
* monkey
* monoclonal antibody
* monorail
* monster
* mop
* mountain
* mouse
* mouth
* muffinface
* muffin
* muff
* mug
* muskrat
* mycobacterium
* neck
* needle
* neurotoxin
* neverland
* newspaper
* nexus
* ninja
* Nintendo
* nitrogen
* nob
* noseblower
* nostalgia
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* noun
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* number
* nystagmus
* ocean
* octohedron
* octopus
* oddball
* okra
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* ooze
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* option
* orc
* osmosis
* osteoporosis
* ostrich egg
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* oven
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* oxygen
* Pac-Man
* padlock
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* paycheck
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* period
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* philosopher
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* pile of flaming horse feces
* pill
* pillow
* piñata
* pine cone
* PINGA
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* plasma cannon
* plastic
* plate
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* poodle
* pool table
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* potato
* president-for-life
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* Pyrex
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* raccoon
* racket
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* read-only memory
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* reindeer
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* Republican
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* rickroll
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* rifle
* ripple
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* road
* rocket
* rock
* rollerblade
* rope
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* rubber duck
* rucksack
* sacrifice
* salad fork
* sarcoma
* sarcophagus
* sceptre
* scroll
* sea bass
* search engine
* Sega
* shank
* shark
* sheep
* showdown
* skull
* snake
* snowflake
* Soliton radar
* Sony
* soundboard
* space
* Sparta
* speaker
* spermicide
* spoon
* spork
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* squid
* stampede
* stamp
* stapler
* station wagon
* statue
* steak dinner
* steak knife
* terrorist FREEDOM FIGHTER
* stick
* stool sample
* street sign
* stripper
* Subaru
* suicidal lemming
* suicide bomber
* Suzuki
* sweet and sour chicken
* Swiss cheese
* Taahgaarxian
* tadpole
* tank
* Tanner Thompson
* teabag
* telephone
* tempest
* temple
* ten-foot pole
* tennis racket
* terracotta
* terrorist
* Texas toast
* thong
* thumbtack
* tire
* tit
* titty
* toaster
* toboggan
* tofu
* tomato
* tong
* tooth
* toothpick
* Toyota
* tractor
* treehouse
* treetop
* truffle
* t-shirt
* tube
* Turing machine
* turkey sandwich
* tuxedo
* tyrant
* US Navy aircraft carrier
* Utility Muffin Research Kitchen
* VCR
* vector field
* verb
* vertigo
* virus
* Volkswagen
* Volvo
* vomit
* vortex
* vulva
* waffle
* wall
* waterfall
* watermelon
* Weltschmerz
* whereabouts
* whip
* Wii
* xanthochroi
* Xbox
* xenomorph
* xylophone
* yellow submarine
* YouTube Poop
* zebra
* Zelda
* zipper
* zoot suit
* Zork
* zygote !! 18:04, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
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