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| - Well, all the other non-four clans were being nominated, so I thought I would work on this one. The article looks fine to me, but I have one question. Does the History section need references? There was a comment on the talk page saying we did, and I wasn't sure. I don't think so, but if we do, I will be more than happy to add them. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Nope, history sections do not need references, but can you add more references for the description sections? 23:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Are you still working on this? 23:58, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
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| - Well, all the other non-four clans were being nominated, so I thought I would work on this one. The article looks fine to me, but I have one question. Does the History section need references? There was a comment on the talk page saying we did, and I wasn't sure. I don't think so, but if we do, I will be more than happy to add them. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Nope, history sections do not need references, but can you add more references for the description sections? 23:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC) For like Fourtrees and Warm-Rocks? The other description sections have a reference for almost every sentence. 03:23, September 16, 2011 (UTC) I guess you could, but I'm not sure. Maybe expand The Sight a little more, because Spottedleaf had a big moment. 01:47, September 17, 2011 (UTC) Well, you don't have to cite every sentence, but you should cite every sentence that is unconfirmed or non-obvious. 01:03, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Are you still working on this? 23:58, September 29, 2011 (UTC) If he isn't, may I take over? 02:00, October 2, 2011 (UTC) Yes, sure. He hasn't left a comment for a few weeks now. 16:29, October 2, 2011 (UTC) I had this expanded a long time ago x3 Comments? 15:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC) Oops, XD. Ok, so find another reference for the last sentence in the intro. Then find refs for the last paragraph in territory, Fourtrees, Warm-Rocks, Realtion to Living Cats, Ceremonies, Influence, Life in StarClan, and Other Ancestors. Sorry, I know that's a lot, but if I become inactive again, I'd like to know work is still being done without me having to comment. XD 18:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC) Done! 01:14, October 12, 2011 (UTC) A lot of references aren't specific enough like: "Revealed in Night Whispers" or "Such as when Brambleclaw is invited to undertake a quest". The references need to be actual books with page numbers. 01:41, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Oops! I forgot. I'll fix those. 20:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC) I took care of a lot of them. All you have to do is the last paragraph in Life in StarClan and then Other Ancestors. 23:53, October 19, 2011 (UTC) Are you still working on this? If no comment in 5 days, this will be given to someone else or declined. 22:39, October 22, 2011 (UTC)
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