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| - [[File:Slightfoot.warrior.png]] Yay! My first Warrior for the PCA! Tried to match him as best I could to the apprentice, and im super proud of him! 01:06, April 16, 2015 (UTC) Oh goodness. Define the earpink quite a lot. It shouldn't be blurred that much. Maybe smudge the white chest some more as well 01:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC) I can see you changed the earpink, but you have to say reuploaded when you post a new change. But the earpink still needs to be triangular. Try using a binary pixel tool. Erase the ear pink all together, redraw it in a triangle, and blur it very slightly. 01:21, April 16, 2015 (UTC) Blur the shading a ton, make sure the white patch on his chest is shaded too. Maybe make the earpink a little less neon? Ravenstep⋆ 01:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped Better? 01:34, April 16, 2015 (UTC) Still a problem with the earpink. Look at some other images to get a feel for how you should draw the earpink triangle. As for the other parts of Slightfoot, some of the shading is leaking away from the legs and stuff. If you want to look closely and change it, then I'd advise you to do that. 01:38, April 16, 2015 (UTC) Shouldn't we wait before this is settled? 免得我们还要重做 02:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC) No- there's no need, considering it wouldn't be done for a long time. As far as I'm concerned, the chest is smudged with a hard-edged brush 08:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped 01:31, April 17, 2015 (UTC) he needs texture, and on top of that texture theres dull highlights, and it was all smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. 04:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC) The chest too, it still looks over-blurred 08:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC) Are you using the smudge tool in GIMP? I know you said you used GIMP. Use the smudge tool on the white chest. The earpink looks a lot better! Maybe lighten it a bit more? 13:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped Oh my, the texture didn't fail… Im insanely proud of this 00:42, April 18, 2015 (UTC) Lighten up the earpink a bit, and make it less neon-y? 00:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC) It's not neon at all. It blends well perfectly with the fur. 01:24, April 18, 2015 (UTC) Make it more pink than purple please. That's pretty much what Storm was asking, simplified. Just make it a lighter pink on the spectrum. Very nice^^ 13:51, April 18, 2015 (UTC) I just looked at the apprentice, and I think the patch on his chest is a tiiiiny bit smaller Correct me if I am wrong It could just be my screen though 07:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC) But that is the apprentice, which is a smaller blank. 13:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC) I think the chest white is fine, so im not changing it yet 19:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC) It's supposed to be small, so please shrink it. While the apprentice blanks are smaller, the patch of white you have on here is much too big. Re~Upped Ok 22:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC) I actually saved the image and zoomed it in to see details, and I think I can see a black outline around the white chest and the bottom whisker. There's also a black hard-eged splotch on his back. I like him! Just try to see what I was talking about (might be just my screen) and blur the hind paws shading slightly^^ good job 14:13, April 20, 2015 (UTC) That's actually normal "waste", per se. Define the light on the front paw closest? 18:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC) How is it "waste"? It's on the pelt. 00:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC) Wait, were you talking about on the warrior or apprentice image, Silver? 00:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC) I was talking about this warrior image. It could be just my screen though 00:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped Uh yeah... Here world 02:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC) I think there's a lil bit of waste on the top of the nose; also, make the earpink more triangular. 15:35, April 23, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped I like this. :) 01:16, April 24, 2015 (UTC) There's still a somewhat outline around the white, is it just the shading? But the shading really shouldn't just go around the shape >.> 13:49, April 26, 2015 (UTC) Closest to le lineart or towards his body over there? ===> 14:03, April 26, 2015 (UTC) Idk, just around the white chest 11:43, April 27, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped 00:30, April 29, 2015 (UTC) The earpink is still quite neon, and its quite small as well. Maybe expand the earpink back out a ways, and dull down the neon-ness. Make it more dull gray-ish pink, but still have a bit of brightness. 20:27, April 29, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped Sunstream Strongly Dislikes Earpink. 00:36, April 30, 2015 (UTC) Shrink down the white dash on her chest please. And I'll promote you to an apprentice, since you seem to know what you are doing. 11:38, April 30, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped Yay thank you! :) 13:40, April 30, 2015 (UTC) Blur the shading more ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 01:42, May 1, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped Oh wow your sig Bramble and Burnt's are like...Identical in colors. 02:02, May 1, 2015 (UTC) lol, sorry, The base is looking dark greenish brown, any chance you could make it blacker? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 02:05, May 1, 2015 (UTC) I honestly think it looks perfectly black 02:26, May 1, 2015 (UTC) that neck shading needs major lightening or something, and the white patch would be included in that shading. 21:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped 01:37, May 2, 2015 (UTC) This should be named Slightfoot.warrior.png. The wiki is case sensitive 07:50, May 2, 2015 (UTC) Eee it wont let me rename it. :T 22:42, May 3, 2015 (UTC) No, but I can rename it. =P Blur the shading on the back foot behind the body and the neck and the face. Looking good ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:50, May 5, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped 15:27, May 9, 2015 (UTC) Blur the shading around the neck area. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:08, May 10, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped I hope it shows 01:16, May 12, 2015 (UTC) I can't tell if it's my monitor or not, but it looks like there's a huge blob of black on the neck/muzzle/stomach areas. It starts up on the muzzle, reaches down towards the neck, and then goes on towards the stomach.... It could very well be my monitor, but I'm unsure. Re~Upped -☽Sunstream ✼ Quarter Quell Time!☾ 18:18, May 13, 2015 (UTC) CBA? 22:28, May 13, 2015 (UTC) I'm sorry, but I still see the blob of black. I also think that he's too light- this is more dark gray than black. I color picked from the apprentice, so the fur is fine, but I shall obliterate the black blob. -☽Sunstream ✼ Quarter Quell Time!☾ 23:11, May 15, 2015 (UTC) Just because you color picked doesn't necessarily mean you got the actual pelt color. You could've gotten a highlight. When someone says you need to darken it, you darken it. Don't use the 'its fine' thing. ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 03:03, May 16, 2015 (UTC) Re~Upped I have oblitterated the blob with mythical erasers. I used my magical pencil tool to darken. -☽Sunstream ✼ Quarter Quell Time!☾ 22:56, May 17, 2015 (UTC) No you didn't. It's still there. It's under the white chest flash and on the muzzle too. Storm♫ 23:00, May 17, 2015 (UTC) I'm sorry, but this has been up more than a month, so I have to decline this. Archiving.
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