Ima take this one. -- 17:49, August 15, 2010 (UTC) Shabidoo 02:57, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
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| - Ima take this one. -- 17:49, August 15, 2010 (UTC) Shabidoo 02:57, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
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| - I gave you this extra bump because i may have a bit of a bias opinion, you know, liking this site and all. Also because I'm not sure if you actually hate it or your just that good at writing articles. Because if you wrote that even though you like this site, great job, because it sure seems like you hate it!
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| - Before i begin this i wish to tell you that there is something wrong with your commas, but i think I know what. You have to change the language on your keyboard. If you are using Windows 7 or vista, there should be a little keyboard symbol on your task bar, click that and pick the proper language. If you are using a mac or anything else your on your own.
I'm not quite sure what happened with the first picture. Did it interfere with the quote or something? Because it's half way down the first section. Maybe you placed it there. Try placing the Image link at the very top, even above the quotes, that should fix it.
There are also quite a few spelling and grammar errors, be sure to get them check out by writing at the top of your page. That will get some people to look over your page and fix typos and mistakes.
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| - Is this sight some sort of sausagefest? These pictures are completely irreverent to the article. Not only that, but the captions don't cover for the poor images. And the first one has a website link to it. You should photoshop that.
If you are going to make images, make sure to mention them in the article. And if all comes to worst and you cant, make a good caption to sum the picture up. If you leave images the way you did, people will not understand them and just find them to be a nuisance.
I do understand why you used them however, but some may not, and people won't get why you spelled wurst like that. So fix that up by doing what i said earlier.
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| - I personally don't like the idea of the article but i like what you did with it. A lot of people criticize the site, but most of them are just trolls, you actually know the site. I find that you did point out some of the sites follies which is good. But on top of that you made up too many. There is a difference between over emphasizing something and just making sh*t up. What you did was just make stuff up. If you made things seem worse that they actually are the page would have been hilarious! So if you go back and change things that are clearly not true and add things that are over dramatic that would be perfect. For example: If i were to mock on how we lie and speak utter nonsense i would do something like: The people at this site all get together every Thursday at TGI fridays and smoke there lungs out with marijuana, then they go home and smash on the keyboard criticizing every Asian, gay, and politician in sight.
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| - Well good effort. It just didn't click for me. But it defiantly had some funny moments! That shows me that you have what it takes, and with a better article idea, you'll do some great work! Keep that funny side close in hand!
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| - Ima take this one. -- 17:49, August 15, 2010 (UTC) Shabidoo 02:57, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
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