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| - This is another story I wrote with Creeperman129 for Baby You're a Rich Man. He came up with the idea. I made the google doc, which was originally called "daburas tiem 2 shine n babidis there n some other people". Unlike for previous collaborations with Creeperman, I wrote almost all of my contributions while drunk, not while high (there is one exception that I will note below), which is how I did all of my BYARM collabs with Destructivedisk. I've done a lot of these stories, so what kept me interested was developing lore for my universe. Liranion for example is a real place in my universe. Aekyarian's sister, Lilith, is going to be featured in at least one story of mine in the future (she's probably going to be Dabura's wife in my universe). And so stuff like that, while not canon in this story, is canon to my universe. I developed stuff here to be used in canon stories, as if these drunken ramblings were a workshop of sorts. This was something I also tried to a much lesser degree in The Adventures of Beerus and Whis...IN SPACE!. So in terms of my writing, I kind of just wrote whatever was on my mind. I won't say it was all improvised because I got some ideas while not drunk and then wrote them out while drunk. This story took a long time to write, so I was able to draw from a number of sources. My extended parody of Paradise Lost could not have happened had the story not taken so long to write. Even so, it was a bit frustrating how long it took this thing to get done, because it always felt like I was ready to go and Creeperman would say "I'll edit tomorrow" or something like that, just killing my momentum. I wrote my first scene on October 23, 2016. Creeperman wrote his first and I wrote my second on October 24. I added an addendum to my second scene on November 5. He wrote his second scene on November 8, and I got my third one done in the wee hours of November 9. His third scene and my fourth scene were written on November 11. His fourth scene and my fifth scene were written on November 13. Creeperman worked on his fifth scene from November 16 to November 18, when he finished it. My sixth scene was written on November 18, as was Creeperman's sixth, and my seventh. So almost all of the story was completed by that date. Creeperman then returned on November 19 to bang out the last section, and then we posted it on this site later that day. This story is all about form and ideas for me. I don't remember much of the plot or what we did with that, other than this is a story about how Babidi gathered Dabura, Pui Pui, and Yakon for his attack on Earth. I do sort of regret that we didn't get to show how he captured Spopovich and Yamu. But yeah, this is a pretty straightforward BYARM story, I think, so that's all I have to say about it here.
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