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Ok, so I've been tinkering with/adding to this page for quite a while, and I was kinda curious as to whether it actually turned out funny. Just a quick review should be sufficient this time around. - 02:08, Sep 7

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rdfs:label	Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Hotwire a car (quick)
rdfs:comment	Ok, so I've been tinkering with/adding to this page for quite a while, and I was kinda curious as to whether it actually turned out funny. Just a quick review should be sufficient this time around. - 02:08, Sep 7
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Pcomment	fine, i'll give it a proofread. all your images are on the right, but it's a preference thing, so i'll just point it out.
Icomment	good images, they contribute nicely. the first one's caption is a little weird.
Pscore	8(xsd:integer)
Ccomment	5(xsd:integer)
Cscore	9(xsd:integer)
Hcomment	intro: 7 a good start. i'm intrigued, and want to keep reading, so a success. some issues, though. instead of 'bajillion' you could use a more realistic number. instead of the planet making things difficult, maybe it's fate or god. i'm not sure you need the 'whole' after the snort a brick line. it isn't clear what your tone is, but i'll come back to that after reading more. alibi: 8 good. i like this section. maybe a little more length. outfit: 10 i like the first few sentences. i don't have much to say about the sleek part, it's good as-is. same thing with the second section, i can't find a fault. actual process: 10 again, i feel bad because i really don't have anything to say. but then again i dont feel bad because this section is awesome. *end results: 9 pretty good wrap-up. i'd say the 'invincible act' thing is kind of weak. and parking on people was kind of confusing.
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Fcomment	my preview button tels me that your score is 42.3. i would support this aticle on VFH and will think about nomming it if you dont . anyway, great job, and good luck!
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abstract	Ok, so I've been tinkering with/adding to this page for quite a while, and I was kinda curious as to whether it actually turned out funny. Just a quick review should be sufficient this time around. - 02:08, Sep 7

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