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Here's my latest project. This is possibly my best work so far, if I do say so myself. -- 18:14, 25 August 2007 (UTC) I added a few pictures, some more jokes, and trimmed it a bit. Anything else that needs to be done with it? -- 23:15, 28 August 2007 (UTC) Thanks for the help! But I don't need any more pee. 23:59, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

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rdfs:label	Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Simeon I
rdfs:comment	Here's my latest project. This is possibly my best work so far, if I do say so myself. -- 18:14, 25 August 2007 (UTC) I added a few pictures, some more jokes, and trimmed it a bit. Anything else that needs to be done with it? -- 23:15, 28 August 2007 (UTC) Thanks for the help! But I don't need any more pee. 23:59, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
dcterms:subject	Pee Review
Mcomment	It is very long, so it naturally comes off as a tiny bit rambling. I would make a conscious attempt to cut away some of the dead space. I know that this is hard , but it definitely should be done. Sometimes, in the interest of making the article long enough for the main, we lose track of the size, and it becomes hard to manage. It would help the humor and the appeal of the article if you trimmed it a little bit. Not sure how much was trimmed, but I still feel similar about this.
Pcomment	Very well written.
Icomment	The images are very repetitive, so you need to step above and beyond with the caption work. Saying that "this is a shoddy depiction" so many times comes off as beating a dead horse with a dead horse. Dead horse. The fun meta-humor and the newness of it make this much better.
Pscore	9(xsd:double)
Ccomment	Historical figures are always difficult to pull off, because it can very easily become "such and such sucked lulz" or "so and so was the greatest everzor!" You don't fall into this trap.
Cscore	9(xsd:integer)
Mscore	6(xsd:integer)
Hcomment	Perhaps a little too subtle at times, there are long stretches when I'm not laughing at anything new. However, what's there is good, perhaps consider adding a couple more jokes here and there.
Iscore	8(xsd:integer)
Hscore	7(xsd:integer)
Fcomment	All around, pretty damn good.
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Signature	--08-27
abstract	Here's my latest project. This is possibly my best work so far, if I do say so myself. -- 18:14, 25 August 2007 (UTC) I added a few pictures, some more jokes, and trimmed it a bit. Anything else that needs to be done with it? -- 23:15, 28 August 2007 (UTC) Thanks for the help! But I don't need any more pee. 23:59, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

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