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* Oss Wilum - see outstanding objections from failed RFAN. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
* Sate Pestage—underlinking, examples of "unknown" OOU perspectives, succession box lacks before-years and after-years, tag in the article, and needs to be used for non-templated citations. Requires more context in numerous places, particularly the beginning of the Bio—too much is left unexplained to the casual, perhaps less knowledgeable reader. Also, a better job needs to be done with handling the conflict of his death; the in-universe part of the article presents speculation on whether he actually died a second time, which is still unwarranted in the Bio in spite of the complexity of the conflict. CC7567 (talk) 07:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
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* Oss Wilum - see outstanding objections from failed RFAN. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
* Sate Pestage—underlinking, examples of "unknown" OOU perspectives, succession box lacks before-years and after-years, tag in the article, and needs to be used for non-templated citations. Requires more context in numerous places, particularly the beginning of the Bio—too much is left unexplained to the casual, perhaps less knowledgeable reader. Also, a better job needs to be done with handling the conflict of his death; the in-universe part of the article presents speculation on whether he actually died a second time, which is still unwarranted in the Bio in spite of the complexity of the conflict. CC7567 (talk) 07:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
* In my opinion, the fact some quality articles link to articles in the intro, and then don't link to them in the body at all (I would guess the only ones that apply would all be ones that were made good or featured before 2008, when standards were made greater and self-voting was not allowed) is just plain terrible. I have recalled manually fixing a few FA's with those problems. Hanzo Hasashi 18:59, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
* Military Creation Act—from just having to add two Fact Files to the Sources list, it doesn't look like that Sources list is complete. The Fact Files need to be consulted in some way. CC7567 (talk) 09:02, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
* I took the liberty of adding the Fact Files listed in the index, but that probably isn't all of them, and all of the ones I just added need to be checked for new info, since apparently that hasn't happened yet. CC7567 (talk) 09:12, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
* Rango Tel-a lot of conjecture, such as "but it is not known if he took any steps to protect her, or even if he cared for her. It is known that he left her alone, undefended in the relatively hostile Tatooine while he hunted for Nale, although this may again have been a product of his naiveté." I do not know whether that is a violation of MOS, or if it is actually mentioned like that in-universe. If it is indeed not mentioned in-universe, it has to go. Hanzo Hasashi 02:34, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
* Boil, Battle of Kiros, Zygerrian—All require an update, and with the latter two I'll have to wrap my head around regarding the integration of the new information with the old stuff. Lucky me. QuiGonJinn File:Senate seal.svg(Talk) 14:47, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
* Lately we've been trying to avoid probing stuff for new material that's been out less than a month, so you should be safe. We can probe it at the next meeting if necessary. CC7567 (talk) 18:26, November 26, 2011 (UTC)
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