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| - I checked the rules again, and I am allowed to have one more nomination. I expanded her Skyclan's Destiny section overtime. 00:02, September 22, 2010 (UTC) Her Firestar's Quest section could be expanded. -- 00:04, September 22, 2010 (UTC) Cats of the Clans could be expanded a tad. 00:05, September 22, 2010 (UTC) Maybe.... you could add a bit of her in the manga part of SkyClan's Destiny. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 00:39, September 22, 2010 (UTC) Expanded Firestar's Quest and added the manga part, though I can't expand Cats of the Clans. 01:07, September 22, 2010 (UTC) Needs some more quotes that show personality, and could more be added to her leadership ceremony? I'm not sure, but there isn't very much on it right now. 02:54, September 22, 2010 (UTC) I added more quotes. 04:25, September 22, 2010 (UTC) The second quote with Echostsong is good, but could more ne added to it? Like, add Leafstar's respons and some more dialogue. Also, did you look into the leader ceremony? 20:41, September 22, 2010 (UTC) Actually, I believe that the chapter ends there, and Leafstar didn't respond. And I can't find the leader ceremony right now, but I'm trying. 20:53, September 22, 2010 (UTC) Maybe put in a quote from Quest? And her tree should be deleted. It's only her and her unnamed mother. -- 17:27, September 23, 2010 (UTC) Did it. :) 20:33, September 23, 2010 (UTC) The tree I mean. 22:09, September 24, 2010 (UTC) So anything I can do? :) 15:58, September 26, 2010 (UTC) Did you add a Quest quote? 17:05, September 26, 2010 (UTC) I can't really find a good one that shows her true self. 17:07, September 26, 2010 (UTC) You need to try and add more dialogue to her warrior ceremony, and add a leader ceremony for her. 17:41, September 26, 2010 (UTC) I added more to her warrior ceremony and I will add her leader ceremony soon. 17:47, September 26, 2010 (UTC) By Leadership Ceremony, do you mean when Firestar announces that she'll be leader, or the actual StarClan ceremony? 00:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC) Not quite sure which one it is, but I know it's the one that is "I, mentor of Skyclan and leader of Thunderclan ___ do you, Leafstar ___" thing one. xD If that is the starclan one..o_o 02:55, September 27, 2010 (UTC) You need to add the StarClan ceremony where she receives all nine of her lives. 21:29, September 27, 2010 (UTC) But Firestar nor Bluestar have one. Should they? The givers of their nine lives are listed in the Leader Information. 00:20, September 28, 2010 (UTC) I should think so. 01:20, September 28, 2010 (UTC) It'll be a long quote, but I'll find them. :) 11:16, September 28, 2010 (UTC) For some reason, I thought there was a template for that, but there isn't. I am working on getting it, so until then this nomination will have to be stalled a bit. :) 21:12, September 28, 2010 (UTC) Is it done yet? :P 22:21, October 7, 2010 (UTC) I've done the leader ceremony for you, Frostheart. It looks good to me. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 22:51, October 7, 2010 (UTC) Thank you, Riverpelt, I completely forgot about it. Anyways, comments before the vote? 23:09, October 7, 2010 (UTC) Your welcome Whitestorm! =) RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:11, October 7, 2010 (UTC) Vote's up. 12:17, October 8, 2010 (UTC)
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