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| - I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to bring the article to FAC. It already passed GA so I hope to achieve my first FA article Thanks, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 01:10, 21 June 2012 (UTC) The Rambling Man (talk) 17:43, 3 July 2012 (UTC) I have File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed most issues, mind a second look? Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
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| - I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to bring the article to FAC. It already passed GA so I hope to achieve my first FA article Thanks, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 01:10, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
* Lead is possibly a little too long, see WP:LEAD, I would imagine just two paras to summarise an article of this size.
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* No images available?
* It was not a single. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* No but any kind of free image available to brighten it up? The Rambling Man (talk) 17:55, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* No there's no free image of the singer on Commons. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 20:40, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* "to help her crossover attempt." crossover to what?
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* "mid-tempo" just linking tempo looks odd here.
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* " influences of urban and soul music" not of, from. or "is influenced by urban..."
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* "Selena had used these techniques to emphasize the song's title and its central theme." no need for "had".
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* "The lyrics are about the love felt " -> "The lyrics describe the love..."
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* As usual, I'd suggest a quick copyedit from someone who can do it much better than me.
* File:Yes check.svg Done Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* Use same name in infobox for Quintilla as writer and producer.
* What do you mean? Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* As a writer you have his full name and as a producer just his surname. I know it's odd but in info boxes we do tend to repeat full names. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:55, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* Oh okay, I've File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed this. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 20:40, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* ""Missing My Baby" was written by Selena y Los Dinos backup singer Pete Astudillo and produced by Selena's brother and principal record producer A.B. Quintanilla III." almost verbatim copy of the lead. Try to mix it up a little.
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* Why have a single row table sortable? What do you mean? Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
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* The table which has one row is sortable. It's pointless having it as "sortable". The Rambling Man (talk) 17:55, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 20:40, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* "Full Force - backing vocalists" en-dash.
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* Ref 2 needs a sub, ref 3 doesn't but is a very similar source, really?
* I don't see the difference, the only thing is the year (1993) and the editor Burr, Ramiro. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* Please link things the first time, not the second, e.g. Austin American-Statesman. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:55, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 20:40, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
* Ref titles should comply with WP:DASH ie. spaced en-dash, not hyphen.
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* Denver Post is The Denver Post.
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
* Check other publication names.
* File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC) The Rambling Man (talk) 17:43, 3 July 2012 (UTC) I have File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Fixed most issues, mind a second look? Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 22:46, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
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