My first solo venture into unscriptland. Opinions??? --THE 14:58, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
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| - My first solo venture into unscriptland. Opinions??? --THE 14:58, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
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| - The miscellaneous aspects of this script are pretty damned miscellaneous if you ask me.
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Pcomment
| - Well written; a little proofreading might help. As a minor point, I'd use square brackets instead of round brackets when you're breaking dialog to describe action, but maybe that's just me.
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| - Very nicely done. At the beginning, I thought the premise might wear thin by the end. However, the
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| - I laughed all the way through it.
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| - I love this article. Find some suitable images, and I think you've got something VFH worthy here.
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