Something I'm kinda working on right now. I'm kind of spun out right here, though. Any thoughts & comments muchly appreciated. THX -- 05:00, Nov 27
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| - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Rocky Mountains
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| - Something I'm kinda working on right now. I'm kind of spun out right here, though. Any thoughts & comments muchly appreciated. THX -- 05:00, Nov 27
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| - Obviously, it's sections are a little on the short side. However, you write pretty damn well, I'd say.
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| - The one picture you have is cool, but could you add one more of just mountains with a funny little caption at the bottom? That'd be great thanks.
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| - The fact that I didn't see that the article was about rock muzak makes it clear that the idea is above the norm. Why? I'm not sure. I guess it means that I didn't think of it, which means that it must be clever
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* [8] Intro
I gave you an above average score because it's funny in spite of it's randomness. Notice the "in spite of" part? I thought you would. It introduces the topic like it should plus it got me to giggle. However, I'm a giggler.
* [6] Common Rock Formations Within The Rocky Mountains
Weird little introduction that flew over my head. The randomness has gotten in the way of the funny, I guess.
* [7] Power Trio Rock Formation
Ooooh, I get it. The ROCKy mountains. (God I'm stupid.) Okay, anyway, it's acceptable now that I get the joke.
* [6] Jazz Quartet Rock Formation
That was very random, sir! I... I don't know what to say...
* [4] Def Leppard Rock Formation
Well, I'm glad I don't know who Def Leppard is, then. This section should probably just go, if you asked for MY opinion on the matter.
* [9] The Balboan Range
Yes, way above average. Yes.
* [6] Orchestral Formation
Good idea talking about classical music in all of this. But that section in itself was technically good, but just boring, that's all.
* [6] National Parks
It's a nearly acceptable ending. Obviously, it's a work in progress but that's not going to make me more lenient. I'm a hard ass.
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| - (8+6+7+6+4+9+6+6)/8 round1
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| - Uh, okay, expansion? I'm not sure. Obviously you could talk about famous musicians and famous genres of music. In fact, don't just stick with rock: go crazy. Uh, did I help at all?
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| - Cajek/sig (Nov 27, 14:19)
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| - Something I'm kinda working on right now. I'm kind of spun out right here, though. Any thoughts & comments muchly appreciated. THX -- 05:00, Nov 27
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