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Robzored 14:18, 1 February 2008 (UTC)

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  • Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Be an Inventor
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  • Robzored 14:18, 1 February 2008 (UTC)
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Pcomment
  • All of the sections, including the intro, are too short and they break up the flow of the article. Expand them. It doesn't necessarily have to be with jokes: the more text you write the more opportunities for jokes will occur to you.
Icomment
  • Very good: these are the article's real strength.
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  • 6(xsd:integer)
Ccomment
  • The concept isn't the best insofar as scope for humour is concerned. But you have done well with it.
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  • 6(xsd:integer)
Hcomment
  • Ok, it starts out weak and gets stronger as the article goes on. Its too short though, and requires more humour. I think the prototype section is quite a good place for this. I mean, its drunk people doing DIY! For "Think of Stuff", perhaps you should give some more advice there. Link it to the image: "If you can't invent anything original, why not combine two existing products. MP3 Players can be put into almost anything these days!" - Something like that.
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  • 9(xsd:integer)
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  • 7(xsd:integer)
Fcomment
  • The main thing required here is expanding.
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