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| - File:Heatherstar.leader.pngHere eye's kinda creep me out... Anyway, first leader charart up and ever since I first saw her's the highlight's have just been really bothering me. Redid the charart because the shading proved to be a real pain in the tail. Anyway, comments? 23:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Yeah, make her eyes like they were. Make the nose a gray color since she was described as being gray (I think). Blur the shading a little more. (it's so much easier when the changes show to critique >~<) 23:25, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Waste wrong the charart 04:06, September 25, 2011 (UTC)
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| - File:Heatherstar.leader.pngHere eye's kinda creep me out... Anyway, first leader charart up and ever since I first saw her's the highlight's have just been really bothering me. Redid the charart because the shading proved to be a real pain in the tail. Anyway, comments? 23:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Yeah, make her eyes like they were. Make the nose a gray color since she was described as being gray (I think). Blur the shading a little more. (it's so much easier when the changes show to critique >~<) 23:25, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Oh, also, make the earpink fill the ear to the line. Otherwise it's always gonna be small. 23:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. Forgot to erase the waste around the head, I'll get rid of it later. @Ivy, she was described as pinkish-gray but I gave her a gray nose anyway. 23:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Nice! Dull the highlights a little, especially the chest and haunch. Also, blur the tail higlight. ShadewingBlades of the Night 00:19, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing @Shadewing. I think you're looking at the wrong one. The changes aren't showing up now. 01:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Oh, I'm sorry! xC ShadewingBlades of the Night 01:47, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing There's some waste around the head; delete those, and blur the shaidng more. Great job! 20:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC) The highlights are very blotchy. Make them smoother and move them upwards. 01:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Move the highlights on the tail more towards the middle. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 03:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC) Make the left earpink bigger, they look kind of uneven. 16:02, September 24, 2011 (UTC) The light source doesn't seem very consistent. Move the chest highlight over a bit maybe? I don't know, it just seems kinda off. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:55, September 25, 2011 (UTC) Waste wrong the charart 04:06, September 25, 2011 (UTC) Sandstorm, what are you talking about? Please, explain what you mean. 15:56, September 25, 2011 (UTC) Sandstorm, wrong version. Please look into the history to make sure. And I do think she meant there's just waste around the charart, but for future reference please use correct sentence structure, ok? Can you make the eyes like an approved leader? I think the pupils reach down too far and cat's pupils usually aren't as long as their eye. 17:18, September 25, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. Wow, I have been meaning to re-upload this for so long.... 20:06, September 25, 2011 (UTC) 24 hours, approved 23:12, September 26, 2011 (UTC)
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