Humour: I don't understand what the article is 'parodying'--maybe I'm just dumb and don't understand it.
Lingo & Grammar: I would generally take this opportunity to correct grammar, but I'm not sure if that's what you're making fun of. You've certainly made the article completely inaccessible to the average reader. I'm not sure whether these are inside jokes or not. If they are then this shouldn't be here.
Images: They say that whoever manages to photoshop a lightning bolt and evil eyes onto a picture of the retired pope will be crowned King Arthur. For that I commend you.
Concept': I've no idea what Broom Hulda Clark is, but if you rename the article 'Drivel' or 'Textspeak' or something then it might just work.