This has been expanded significantly since its first pee review. Cap'n Ben was helpful, and so can you! --Hyperbole 11:58, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
* And so can I
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| - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Turing Duck Test (second review)
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| - This has been expanded significantly since its first pee review. Cap'n Ben was helpful, and so can you! --Hyperbole 11:58, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
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| - I saw some mistakes, but overall it flows very well.
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| - above average images, especially that first one.
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| - This is where the article shines: it's the mental images that make this article work. I think you should describe the Turing testing site a little more. Other than that, it's hard for me to see what to add.
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| - avg of all the little section things
# Intro Cajek/s|7 Good, concise introduction to the topic at hand. Even if you didn't know who Turing was, this paragraph could introduce you to the subject at hand. The pic makes the section funny .
# The first Turing Duck Test Cajek/s|8 Partly this is an 8 because of the concept. The concept is, itself, hilarious. I can just imagine a dude in a lab coat chasing a frightened duck around and putting it in a sterile white room.
# "Walks Like a Duck" Test Cajek/s|8 A little short, but still worth a giggle. Describe the surroundings of the subjects. Does the duck have handcuffs on, or is it just the human? If not why not, because that confused me .
# "Quacks Like a Duck" Test Cajek/s|8 Still short, but above average. The concept is still crisp and fresh at this point. I am jealous of this article. Must destroy.
# Conclusion of the test Cajek/s|9 You and your article are riding the wave of recent minimalist realistic articles. I could see this getting VFH either now or with very little editing. In fact, this style may very well be your thing.
# Modern Turing Duck Tests Cajek/s|9 the serious tone and weird subject matter is exactly what I was talking about. After two or three features in this style, though, you're going to have to branch out.
# "Walks Like a Duck" Test Cajek/s|7 Interesting, but it's the same joke as last time, plus it's short. Oh, well, it's not exactly the same, so it's still a 7.
# "Quacks Like a Duck" Test Cajek/s|9 Good stuff.
# Conclusion Cajek/s|7 kind of a weak ending, but okay nonetheless.
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| - (7+8+8+8+9+9+7+9+7)/9 round1
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| - Oh hell, I'm gonna nominate it. It's definitely worth a shot.
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| - Cajek/sig2|16:55, 08 Jun 2008
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| - This has been expanded significantly since its first pee review. Cap'n Ben was helpful, and so can you! --Hyperbole 11:58, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
* And so can I
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