Ignorance is strength! 21:32, March 19, 2012 (UTC) All right I'll go for it. - 04:01, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
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| - Ignorance is strength! 21:32, March 19, 2012 (UTC) All right I'll go for it. - 04:01, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
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| - Average of scores. Whoop-de-do
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| - I found a couple of minor instances of gramatical errors but only because I'm a Grammar Nazi. I don't see any other issues.
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| - Appropriate logo reskin and opening picture. Others are great, but I am not a fan of the last four: they're neither ungood, nor good.
: Mediocre at best.
: I feel a better "Little Brother" picture could and should be found. However I would also find it perfectly acceptable to give me the finger and be told "Nobody Cares."
: Has a creepy pedo-smile= certainly should stay.
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| - Well done rewriting concept of book.
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| - Nicely done. Here's my point by point criticism of each section:
*Intro-Good with a hairline fracture: I would take out the second sentence "It was originally written..." as this is exceedingly random and stupid. Other than that: doubleplusgood.
*Plot-Well written synopsis that beautifully blurs the line between reality and BS as well as expertly fusing together something realistic with something that's... well... not. The conclusion is well written: the obvious falsities help portray many of the rewrites as true . BTW, apt placement for the spoiler alert.
*Comparison-Realistic Table-I might be compelled to add minipeace as flamewars or revertwars or something to that effect.
*1984 in Modern Culture-I don't get the quote but perhaps I'm just an idiot .
:-BB is watching-see images
:-References in modern music-I don't think that they're doubleplusgood, but they're not ungood. It is a question of taste and I ask for ketchup in Paris restaurants.
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| - That was a very good article. Thank you for the read good sir- you deserve a gold star and maybe some ice cream.
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| - Ignorance is strength! 21:32, March 19, 2012 (UTC) All right I'll go for it. - 04:01, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
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