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| - Jouchiro watched in awe as he saw his hero shoot off his rasengan, blasting a training dummy to pieces.. Naruto is so cool! One day, I'll be just as strong as he is! And everyone will know me! He watched as Naruto formed his hand signs, and then jumped back when he saw three other complete copies of him emerge in a cloud of smoke. "Shadow Clone Jutsu!" he yelled as this happened. So awesome! Jouchiro pretended to form the same hand sign, and ran around pretending to use the rasengan. He was a 7 year old, after all. He ran around stuck in his fantasy until he bumped into someone, who pushed him down into the dirt.
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| - Jouchiro watched in awe as he saw his hero shoot off his rasengan, blasting a training dummy to pieces.. Naruto is so cool! One day, I'll be just as strong as he is! And everyone will know me! He watched as Naruto formed his hand signs, and then jumped back when he saw three other complete copies of him emerge in a cloud of smoke. "Shadow Clone Jutsu!" he yelled as this happened. So awesome! Jouchiro pretended to form the same hand sign, and ran around pretending to use the rasengan. He was a 7 year old, after all. He ran around stuck in his fantasy until he bumped into someone, who pushed him down into the dirt. "Watch where you're going, you loser!" said the other kid who had pushed him. "Uh, sorry, it won't happen again-" Jouchiro began to say as he climbed to his feet, but then the bully screamed. "What is it?" asked Jouchiro innocently. Before he could get an answer, the kid had already run off, making sure he was safe even though he was under no threat. "Freak! No one wants you here!" said the bully as he ran off, certain to convince his parents against the innocent boy. And then he realised what was going on. the bully had seen Jouchiro's curse, the burden that caused everyone to fear him. He saw that Jouchiro had no eyes. Okami trained in the same courtyard with Jaaku, his black wolf pup practising a new technique his elder brother taught him, the specialty of the Inuzuka. His brother Kiba had been teaching him at the academy when he spotted that creepy new kid from his class the weird one that he heard rumors about. He's a monster, stay away! This time he had been pushed over by another kid and called him a freak, running off from something scary. Okami seemed curious, but first he had to stop that bully. "And so you've gotta... Okami?" He sped past Kiba, who was in the middle of explaining the jutsu further, and shouted "Lets go Jaaku!" The black pup barked and followed his master in running over to the victim. The kid was about ten meters away from Jouchiro when Okami yelled "Fang over Fang!", the name of the technique they had been practicing. The bully was taken off his feet and fell onto his behind crying, now running off screaming. Okami walked over to Jouchiro and helped him up, followed by Kiba. "You ok?" he asks. "I'm fine." replied Jouchiro, brushing dust off his clothes. "I just spooked him." He turned his head to look at his saviour, but then he was greeted with looks of shock. "Are you.. ok?" asked Kiba. "Didn't I tell you? I'm fine." Jouchiro replied, still smiling. "But your eyes..." Okami inquired. "Oh? They were always like that." Kina cleared his throat, being polite and ignoring the obvious problem with Jouchiro. "Anyways, great work Okami. Let's get back to training. If you practice you can make that jutsu a thousand times awesomer!" "Hang on." Blank expressions from his younger brother." "Why?" Kiba asked. "Maybe we should take him with us for a while?" Okami asked. Jaaku begged. Kiba seemed to take a while to decide, but then he came to a decision. "Okay. Sure he can train with us for a while." The two kids and pup beamed. "So what's your name?" asked OkamI as they walked along. "Jouchiro." he answered. "Okami."
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