An in-depth guide to how to literally become LotofLOLS. --NXWave 20:31, 21 December 2007 (UTC) here, let me show you how to do a review, NXWave. (Dec 27 / 18:18)
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| - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Become the next LotofLOLS
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| - An in-depth guide to how to literally become LotofLOLS. --NXWave 20:31, 21 December 2007 (UTC) here, let me show you how to do a review, NXWave. (Dec 27 / 18:18)
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| - This article is fairly ugly. Short section, huge block of text, short section is not a good layout for any article. Also, you have a few spelling/grammar errors in there that should be cleaned up.
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| - This is not only an attempt at a continuation of a pretty lame uncyclopedia in-joke, but it's also just plain mean. I'm being fairly generous giving you a 4 here.
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| - avg of each section. Warning, I don't know who LotofLOLS is except that adopted him.
*Intro [5]
Well, I guess I know who lotoflols is... that doesn't mean I don't think you need the proofreading service or that you shouldn't cool it with the hate. You must really dislike this guy.
*Becoming Him [4]
Yeah, thank you for that. Again, I guess this isn't the best thing for me to review because I just. don't. care. Also, I think this is kinda mean and unnecessary.
*What do I do? [4]
I don't think this works. It's not an ending, it's just a continuation of the rest of the article.
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| - Actually, I don't think I did a good job on this review. I blame myself for not seeing any answers to the question that is this article. I hope that, in the future, not only do you write reviews at least as long as this one, but that you write articles that don't attack people. I don't care what they did . Good luck, NX.
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| - An in-depth guide to how to literally become LotofLOLS. --NXWave 20:31, 21 December 2007 (UTC) here, let me show you how to do a review, NXWave. (Dec 27 / 18:18)
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