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It failed at PLS. is it that bad? 05:46, 7 April 2009 (UTC) flyby first off, I'm assuming User:Mahm00shA/Nile (band) is the proper link. Basically, the problem is that the article is about a band most people have never heard about. When you write about obscure subjects, generally try to give enough information so that a reader who is unfamiliar with the subject can follow it. Since I don't know anything about the subject, I'm not going to do a full review of it. However, there are some formatting mistakes I can point out. * Overuse of the Review Pending --LongLiverh3 05:33, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

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rdfs:comment	It failed at PLS. is it that bad? 05:46, 7 April 2009 (UTC) flyby first off, I'm assuming User:Mahm00shA/Nile (band) is the proper link. Basically, the problem is that the article is about a band most people have never heard about. When you write about obscure subjects, generally try to give enough information so that a reader who is unfamiliar with the subject can follow it. Since I don't know anything about the subject, I'm not going to do a full review of it. However, there are some formatting mistakes I can point out. * Overuse of the Review Pending --LongLiverh3 05:33, 28 May 2009 (UTC)
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Hcomment	Hi, Mahm00sha. It seems this article has been on Pee Review for quite a while. Do not fear, I got this one. Discovery: 5/10 This is a decent start to the article. The humor wasn't there, but it fit into the article great. I would reccomend making this section a bit longer, that would help. Also, I wanna say get rid of the Oscar Wilde quote, it was stupid and unfunny.
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abstract	It failed at PLS. is it that bad? 05:46, 7 April 2009 (UTC) flyby first off, I'm assuming User:Mahm00shA/Nile (band) is the proper link. Basically, the problem is that the article is about a band most people have never heard about. When you write about obscure subjects, generally try to give enough information so that a reader who is unfamiliar with the subject can follow it. Since I don't know anything about the subject, I'm not going to do a full review of it. However, there are some formatting mistakes I can point out. * Overuse of the and templates. This would be fine in moderation, but right now, they are making your article hard to read * You need a reference table at the end if your going to have foot notes. The code for it is: * never put your own name in an article * try to avoid red links whenever possible * you might want to break the paragraph in the "History" section in two. * you article is a bit header heavy. It might look better if you replace all the level two headers (ie. == Title == ) with level 3 headers (ie. === Title === ) fine, thanks :) 11:18, 6 May '09 Review Pending --LongLiverh3 05:33, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

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