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  • Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Hypnotize Someone
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  • I'll be honest. A lot of the stuff caught me off guard, and was able to hit my funnybone for sneak attack damage. Also, please don't kill me for using that sort of reference. It's somewhat short though. You may want to fill it out some more.
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  • The transition is believable enough, but maybe consider toning down the illegibility somewhat, so that it looks like you're only mildly demented as opposed to rolling your head on the keyboard. Additionally, both sections need a bit of spelcheking. Go ask for help.
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  • There's only one, and it doesn't really help with the humor that much. The way I read it, Dr. Narf came off as some senile quack. Maybe find someone who looks like that for his pic. Better yet, include something related to hypnosis, such as "after ze hair haz been set on fiar, yuo can tell them to cleen yur room for free".
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Ccomment
  • On the one hand, shifting from sane to lunatic is easy to expect. On the other, we all know what we really want hypnosis to do.
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  • 8(xsd:integer)
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  • I'll be honest, the second part did make me chuckle a bit, but maybe make it a bit more fluid .
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  • 7(xsd:integer)
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  • You have a good start, but it does need some work, particularly with images and with filling it out. It's rather short as is. Still, it's funny, and that's what's important.
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