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I've listed this article for peer review because… I've worked on this article for quite a while, hoping to create a comprehensive article on the topic and eventually to get it to FA/GA. Would like some feedback on quality/future direction. Thanks, Anti I A (talk) 12:50, 22 June 2012 (UTC) The Rambling Man (talk) 11:49, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

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  • I've listed this article for peer review because… I've worked on this article for quite a while, hoping to create a comprehensive article on the topic and eventually to get it to FA/GA. Would like some feedback on quality/future direction. Thanks, Anti I A (talk) 12:50, 22 June 2012 (UTC) The Rambling Man (talk) 11:49, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
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  • I've listed this article for peer review because… I've worked on this article for quite a while, hoping to create a comprehensive article on the topic and eventually to get it to FA/GA. Would like some feedback on quality/future direction. Thanks, Anti I A (talk) 12:50, 22 June 2012 (UTC) * Lead image caption should not take a period. * Lead is a little brief, the second para is only one sentence long. Have you checked out WP:LEAD to see what we'd expect? * Lead could more adequately summarise the article, e.g. cover a little of the history (not just the format of the member IDs), leading members, benefits etc. * "Frequent flier programs started in their current form" who started the first one? * " ten million actual flown miles" why "actual", what's wrong with just "ten million flown miles"? * "United's number one customer" sounds a bit adverty. * "reaching the ten million mile number" replace number with "landmark" or "mark". * Check refs are formatted correctly, preferably using a template, and don't just use bare URLs which suffer from linkrot. * "for prices as low as $69," reads like an advert. * "even when elites are still being processed on the upgrade wait list." don't even understand this. * Partner Airline in col heading should just be Partner airline. * Star Alliance Member -> Star Alliance member. * Table should comply with MOS:DTT for screen readers by implementing row and col scopes. * Don't over link articles, e.g. you link United Airlines twice in quick succession in the Award travel section. * Premier status section could use more references. * Overall there needs to be some attention applied to making it sound less like an advert for the scheme. * "Million Miles and Beyond" almost reads like a copy-and-paste from the MileagePlus website. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:49, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
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