Couple of questions here. First of all, how's my title? I debated long and hard over what to call this thing, and the current title is a bit of a placeholder. Secondly, could I mainspace it as is? And how VFHable is it in its current state? Thirdly, I would like a lot of attention payed to my prose and my writing. This piece is very dependent on the writing, since it's in first person, and I want to know if I slipped up on my tone somewhere or if I could make the tone better match the character in any way. Finally, I'd like it if a member of PEEING (an Attending or higher would be great, but I know there are some great Stains as well) did this review. Thanks much in advance!