Hi. I finished this a while back. I like it, but I want to make sure it feels right. I need to know if its "awkward" enough, how the prose works, and generally, if it is funny. I would appreciate as much feedback as you could give me. 19:40, 24 June 2008 (UTC) And I forgot to ask. Is length a problem here? If so, I'm not sure what else I would do with it. Please let me know. 19:52, 24 June 2008 (UTC) The mighty Orian is reviewing my article. I think I've hit the jackpot. 04:27, 27 June 2008 (UTC)