Hey, I haven't actually really, changed this page, that much, I've done a little bit of work BUT last time I got quite a harsh review from The Improver (aka NXWave) and I know UU thought it was pretty harsh too, and he expressed some opinions about the article... Anyway last Pee Review left me confuddled as to what I should really do, now I'm just looking for a second opinion, maybe UU could expand more on his comments from last time or someone else could just give me an entirely new opinion. Either way, I just want to have a second opinion. Thanks! - 13:23 3 May