this was my first article, so i figured i'd dust it off and clean it up and take all the stupid out of it. as always, free prize for review! -- 12:40, 21 August 2007 (UTC) Edit: i have another article i'd rather have reviewed, so this one's going on the back burner so as not to blatantly abuse Pee Review. -- 16:33, 21 August 2007 (UTC)