Clipperride 17:23, August 27, 2011 (UTC) I'll gladly do this one. -- - 17:45, 27 August 2011 Thank you - I look forward to seeing what you think --Clipperride 17:40, August 28, 2011 (UTC)\ Looks like he's not doing this after all... apologies, Clipperride. For anyone else who may want to, however, please don't hesitate; this review is open. Hope someone can spare the time to have a read through m'first article as I want to write some more. I'd like to hear if this first one is up to par before continuing. Thanks. --Clipper Ride - Broom Master 1st Class 17:36, September 5, 2011 (UTC) Practice'll get them all up to par eventually, so even if it ain't yet, no matter. You'll get the hang of things; writing just for writing's sake can prove useful in of itself, after all. But anyway,