Well, I did the prose as per orian's review (see the article's talk page). Looking for a third opinion here to see if it improved any after the clean-up. In-depth review appreciated. Thanks in advance, pee's really working right now (must be my absence!) I'll do the review, if you don't mind waiting a few days or so. Is that cool with you Hv? - [15:56 2 June] Assuming it isn't featured by then, sure, that's fine. He he...it'll be your first feature. But okey, here's my template thing then... - [16:03 2 June]