I've been at work on this - but I've got to a point with it where I am a bit concerned of repeating the same jokes over and over again. I would like to know whether it needs a change of pace; something like that. Knucmo2 21:37, November 1, 2009 (UTC) Hawthorn Peebles gave a review which was pretty poor, I've reverted and I hope for a more constructive return this time please. --Knucmo2 19:12, November 3, 2009 (UTC)