Comments? ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 05:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC) Sign of the Moon seems like it's just listing out the appearences/mentions Splash had in the book. Connect many of the short sentences together as they're quite abridged. As well as adding transitions and paragraph breaks where needed. 15:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC) I agree with Atelda. Also, find another quote if possible. The main quote shouldn't be repeated in the "Quotes" section. Redundancy doesn't look good. =P 15:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC) Adding to CBV list... 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)